Steve,
I think the LEED article is OK, easlily understood. I am uncertain what the advasarial criticism is about. Venting their spleen perhaps.
A notable difference between LEED v2.2 and LEED 2009 is in M&R credits. LEED 2009 has dropped the credits 2.1, 2.2, 3.1, 3.2, etc. They are now simply credit 2 or credit 3 or credit 4 etc. For example, credit 3 is either 5% material reuse for 1 point or 10% material reuse for 2 points.
Keep up the noble effort but please abbreviate and streamline the spec language by starting with removing occurences of “shall be” and replace with “:” (colon) which is the gospel according to CSI.
Wayne